Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 15 March 2019

My Accident Story


Sword Fighting
February 2019
By: Riley
I am learning to entertain my audience through a recount.

POW, SMACK, CRACK, these were the noises echoing from my bedroom before an almighty … AHHH! It was a typical afternoon play fighting with my dad. We had our foam swords drawn facing each other as the battle continued. Dad taking another swing at me in good fun, me ducking and diving as I would stab at him. Dad swung at me again with his green foam sword… If this was in slow motion it would be like the matrix but that wasn't it, it was us in my room. I ducked again, not feeling anything as the sword connected with me, but my dad just stared at me with fear in his eye. He ran to his phone in a panic dialing the A&E. I didn’t know what was happening so I looked in the mirror behind me...

Standing before me was red liquid running down my forehead. It was a nightmare even if I couldn’t feel it, it was terrible. The little 8 year old me was scared for life. My dad rushed over with a towel and an ice pack to put on my forehead. My dad made me sit down and wait till he had finished his call with the receptionist at A&E. As he hung up the phone that was it we were off to A&E, VOOMMMM. Once we got there we had to wait so long but then finally we got in to the doctors office. I had to get glue on my forehead, it hurt so much it was like 4 people sitting on your face! But it was over in a bit and I have definitely learnt my lesson to not start a fight with my dad.

Friday, 7 December 2018

Comics

Today I finished my comic. I really like my comic, it is about a hand and some girls talking about something and being mean to each other. My favourite part is when the hand is really creepy and has a really weird face. The next day I was sick and I was really bummed out because that was when our teacher's husband came in (he is a professional at making comics because he wrote one. I also lost my picture of the comics).    

Monday, 3 December 2018

My persuasive writing

Why Robots will take over the world.


Just imagine Robots on a billboard! I know weird and also very creepy and that’s not even the
weirdest thing that they can do. Just imagine in a supermarket not our usual food it could be oil
or metal that robots eat not human food. Just imagine robots selling you food or some produced.
           
Firstly have you ever thought of Robots or AI take over the world well you should, because you
all know that Robots are capable of many things that we can’t do. So if imagine one Robot could
cause a lot of mayhem for humans like me.


Secondly robots could take our jobs. For some of you, you would happily let a Robot take your
job but how are you going to pay your rent or tax you won’t be able to and homelessness will go
up!!


Lastly just imagine a Robot programmed to hack in to things like your computer, iPad or some
other device, they even hack into the white house or something like that. Some robots are very
creepy they always look through the TV and just give you the death stare which I find VERY
creepy.

Now I hope you agree that you think Robots are going to be on billboards and now you should DEFINITELY think that Robots should not exist and be EXTERMINATED! Because they are brainier and smarter than all of us COMBINED!

Wednesday, 14 November 2018

My bedroom

My story is about my bedroom. The start has to start like this: My something was usual enough. It was based on a poem by James K. Baxter. Mine was about my bedroom, I really like it because of the font and this part were I say "and even a little mess" that's my favourite part in my story.

Thursday, 27 September 2018

Fan mail

This week we did Fan Mail. We had to pick a random person out of a bag to write a kind letter to and I got Po'oi. It was really fun doing the fun mail because we got to write to the people in our class. Henry got me and his fan mail to me was really good and nice, it really brightened my day because he said that I am really funny and other stuff.
  

Wednesday, 5 September 2018

My mammal

I am doing an information report on a mammal (Llamas). There are lots of facts about llamas. Hope you enjoy.

Llamas as you all know… I think, are cool creatures but that’s just my opinion, so you don’t have to agree with me but I think you should after I talk to you about these fascinating creatures of the wild.

Llamas can be very tall. They are about 1.7-1.8 m (adults) and their mass is about 130-200 kg (adults)

They live for about 20 years in the wild. The scientific name for is lama glama which is a really weird name. Llamas are actually smart they make really good guards for herds of small animals. Llamas are very friendly but they can spit on you they will also ‘adopt’ a herd of sheep or goats and make them their own. They will also chase off all the coyotes and other predators as well.

An adult llamas diet is 43 to 45 kgs of grass, hay, corn silage, alfalfa and grass roots. Llamas don’t drink as much water as other mammals but they still drink 3 gallons of water a day.

There habitat is Andes mountain there natural habitat is Andean highlands, specifically the Altiplano southeast Peru and western Bolivia.

So that's my blog on a mammal (Llamas)!! Hope you liked it!

Wednesday, 20 June 2018

Poems

1.
A dog ran up a mop 
Then it flopped
So that was the end of the dog 
Who ran up a mop that flopped.
2.
There once was a myth 
It was about a blacksmith
But that myth came fifth 
And that was the story of the myth.

Wednesday, 11 April 2018

My Storm Poem

This senses poem was about the storm we had last night!

I see the lightning striking the sky tower like a fork.
I hear the roar of the thunder next to me.
I smell the nice soup that we're having for dinner.
I taste the rain on my tongue.
I feel the strong breeze on my face. 
It makes me feel excited and scared.

Thursday, 8 March 2018

The Banshee

Once upon a time in a house far far away there lived an old man, an old woman and a little boy. The boy heard a scream coming from the kitchen so he got out of bed. He went to the kitchen and saw an old lady screaming at the old lady and the old man. The old lady turned around and saw the boy. “Why did come into the kitchen little boy” she shrieked. “you are probably wondering why this sounds so creepy but it’s true! YOU made this happen. Everything is going to be gone.Your friends...your family EVERYTHING!”

The banshee screamed a long, terrifying scream. The boy choked and grabbed his heart and collapsed down dead. So that was the story of the banshee!!

MWAHAHAHAHA!!